Lapis Lazuli

I just realised that I haven't properly spammed up the writing forums yet! Oh, how indecent of me! Et donc, voila:

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And if you will smile at me, stone Madonna,
I would only ask that you tell me any truth
the woven centuries of misinformation will do no good for me now.
If I have indeed sold my mantle of blue
for a bottle of vodka
what now for the lost little angus dei?
Shall I pray for my salvation to the painted deities?
I may as well, for all the answers I can find in myself.

Cause that wasn't inspired by art-history class. Awsom though babe

Now to be fair, I know what angus dei means because of music...

Its very good, but again it just comes off as trying to sound clever.

You have a way with words, and I'd love to see what you'd write if it came directly from the heart.

Directly from her heart is her novel, 'scuse me for saying so Hannah dearest.

I don't like this quite as much as the other one, though I love the idea of selling the blue mantle for a bottle of vodka.

Yeah, that was part of my phase of 'hey I've learned some long words!' ... ^^o But I assure you the sentiment did come directly from the depths of my very personal teenage angst. XP