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The Nutshell is a creative collective under the government of Holly-Rose and Hannah-Rose with ODD and SPONTANEOUS tamperings by Logie-Bear; made up of writers, musicians, and artists. Here teacups are rife and insanity is always technicoloured.
 
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Hannah-Rose
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PostSubject: Lapis Lazuli   Fri 2 May 2008 - 8:19

I just realised that I haven't properly spammed up the writing forums yet! Oh, how indecent of me! Et donc, voila:

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And if you will smile at me, stone Madonna,
I would only ask that you tell me any truth
the woven centuries of misinformation will do no good for me now.
If I have indeed sold my mantle of blue
for a bottle of vodka
what now for the lost little angus dei?
Shall I pray for my salvation to the painted deities?
I may as well, for all the answers I can find in myself.
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PostSubject: Re: Lapis Lazuli   Fri 2 May 2008 - 8:25

Cause that wasn't inspired by art-history class. Awsom though babe
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PostSubject: Re: Lapis Lazuli   Fri 2 May 2008 - 8:44

Now to be fair, I know what angus dei means because of music... Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Lapis Lazuli   Fri 19 Sep 2008 - 9:53

Its very good, but again it just comes off as trying to sound clever.

You have a way with words, and I'd love to see what you'd write if it came directly from the heart.
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PostSubject: Re: Lapis Lazuli   Tue 23 Sep 2008 - 23:47

Directly from her heart is her novel, 'scuse me for saying so Hannah dearest.

I don't like this quite as much as the other one, though I love the idea of selling the blue mantle for a bottle of vodka.
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PostSubject: Re: Lapis Lazuli   Wed 24 Sep 2008 - 0:06

Yeah, that was part of my phase of 'hey I've learned some long words!' ... ^^o But I assure you the sentiment did come directly from the depths of my very personal teenage angst. XP

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