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Meganical
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PostSubject: poem two years old   poem two years old Icon_minitimeSat 24 May 2008 - 0:39

This poem was inspired by another poem called "Noise", or something.
And yeah, I wrote this two years ago, so it's one of the last poems that I've written Razz
But I'm going to restart and retry writing again, because you people are motivatiiing <3

Meanwhile, here's the two-year-old poem.
It's really deep and meaningful and is a heavy comment on our society. LOL.

Colours

Baby is bright red and screaming;
Bernie is blue from the cold.
Bella has raided Mum’s jewellery box,
She’s all shiny and dressed up in gold.

Bert is yellow with fever;
Bubbles is all tickled pink;
Babs has polished off all the carrots;
Her face is sort of orange…I think.

Barney has stolen the chocolate -
His face is completely brown;
Bess has dyed her hair purple
(It’s all the new rage in town).

Bobby is looking a little green,
He ate something funny at lunch;
I’m white at the prospect of Mum coming home;
We’re all such a colourful bunch.
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PostSubject: Re: poem two years old   poem two years old Icon_minitimeSat 24 May 2008 - 8:07

Aw, that's really cute!! Sorry, I haven't had any caffeine today so I'm taking it at face value coz I can't do anything else.
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PostSubject: Re: poem two years old   poem two years old Icon_minitimeSat 24 May 2008 - 10:11

TimTam wrote:
Aw, that's really cute!! Sorry, I haven't had any caffeine today so I'm taking it at face value coz I can't do anything else.

<33 Thanky! And that's okay, it's pretty much 2D anyway XD
Mmm... tea
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